I like the energy. You could do more with the vocals, though. And you know it. I feel as if you are pushing the vocals way too far back in the mix, rather than leaving room in the arrangement for something a lot more delicate yet powerful.
I appreciate the variety of styles here, and I like the delicacy in the piece that starts around 2:50, but the opening sequence can keep its power w/o having
so much muddiness in the vocals.