I like what you're doing here, my friend. I feel like the rhythm could be tighter in spots, which would be helpful, especially because it's a poly-rhythmic piece. Specifically, I felt like the bass solo in the beginning, from 36" to around 45" was a little bit too sloppy for me, whereas later you got it together better.
Still very interesting, indeed. I love the experimental nature of this tune and am looing forward to hearing what V3 sounds like!!!