Passage

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Genres: Acoustic, Booty Bass, Other
Tags: Looperc, Platypus, Cody, Sweener, All, Will, Bow, To, The, Great

ruff drapht

Lyrics:
chores: I don't seek passage through here,
hope will find its own way to me,
I try to take hold of the feeling that I,
might never walk away from here

Stream: 128 kbps, 44 kHz (mono)
Download: 320.0 kbps, 44 kHz (mono), 11.41 MB
Playing time (m:ss): 4:59
Date uploaded: Feb 21, 2012, 18:25 EST Show more info
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Kode of Bliss gave feedback to platypus for “Passage”:
Some nice guitar playing. The Vocal recording needs some work to make this track shine. From what I hear you voice sounds good, but I just can't hear it well enough to make out any of the lyrics.
 Feb 05, 2014, 13:20 EST


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to platypus for “Passage”:
Nice blues riffs you've got going there, friend. Very groovy :)

I think this is your first piece with vocals. I like where you're going with this and wouldn't mind hearing some more drafts of this one in the future.

Vocals could be a lot louder for sure. Otherwise, I like where this one seems to be going. Keep up the good work.

-Shoham
 Feb 21, 2012, 19:25 EST
platypus 
Thanks! This is one of a group of new songs I've been working on. Trying to keep it like this style blues/alt or something I don't know. But, yes expect more in the near future!
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Awesome!!! I'll keep an eye out :D
flag (Feb 24, 2012, 20:15 EST)