There's something about this one that I'm not totally crazy about. I think that it's got some really good themes, and it's pretty well produced, but I think that it's the synth tone that you use in certain places, most notably from around 1:13 to 1:58. There's something too soft about it for me. It comes off as too synthetic.
This one needs more balls. Cool font :D
My 2c,
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