Very good harmonies on this one. Sadder lyrics that I had thought, given the title...!
Having heard all three of your tunes on here thus far, I can say that I really like your stuff a lot.
I think that maybe you could put a little bit more punch in some of the bass-lines maybe this one doesn't need a bass-line at all, but with “Only a Fool Would Try”I think that that would be a nice touch.
Thanks, and keep 'em coming!