s.a. zober gave feedback to
platypus for “
Passage”:
Nice blues riffs you've got going there, friend. Very groovy :)
I think this is your first piece with vocals. I like where you're going with this and wouldn't mind hearing some more drafts of this one in the future.
Vocals could be a lot louder for sure. Otherwise, I like where this one seems to be going. Keep up the good work.
-Shoham