Cool tune. I like the lyrics, and chord changes. Drum beat sounds good as well. I'm still feeling like the vocals could be a little bit tighter on some of your tracks.
Great voice, but there's something about these vocal performances which I think could be a good bit tighter, and do even better justice to the rest of what you're laying down.
I think it's just the energy could be higher on the vocal performances. Guitar solo sound very tight, and I like the funky march in the middle of the tune.
Do you know Benci? He's a good singer/songwriter, too.