OK this is weird not sure what your up to showie, but you said you don't smoke weed, so I have to ask, what is in your coffee? What is the overall artistic statement you are tring to make, because I haven't figured it out yet, except it is very creepy.
You said that you wanted to make this more effective. I am not sure what, exactly, you mean. The red/black full screens are very effective. Esp. in full screen mode. Don't use me as a ruler for this but I did have trouble reading the captions. I always have trouble reading movie credits.
Ripping Blossoms face out and replacing it with the monster's face was a nice touch. I don't know what Blossom will have to say about it, though. Could it be that you do not have the license that allows derogation of her likeness?
Having the Blossom figure and card move about the screen was also a cool effect.
Looking forward to new things from your new software.