Pretty cool compoisiton guys. Somewhat pitchy at times, but otherwise a good tune. Well composed, and with some neat concepts, I like the lyrics, bvut would like to hear a somewhat cleaner and much longer version. Thanks!
You've almost got a Smashing Pumpkins sort of vibe going on with your rhythm guitar. I like it. There's a dreamy quality to the song that I enjoy. If you eased up on the drum track a little, I think it would be even better - your snares are a bit punchy for such a subdued track.