Ian MacPhail

An odd piece. I like the crown on the chin and the composition is perfectly confusing, which makes the piece more interesting. Love the hints of Simpsons and disney!

Those instrumentals are pretty natural sounding mate. Maybe slow the attack on a few of them a bit more so it's not so robotic? I'm loving the vibe through most of it, surely a bit of rhythm percussion couldn't hurt? Very relaxing, good work.

Very clever story. Quirky characters as always... One thing I would suggest is that while I enjoyed your narrative voice, I feel as if you could give a lot more power to your characters if you would give them some more dialogue. I feel like they are interesting creatures, from an interesting world and would like to hear their voices a little more clearly in these stories. Thank you,
-Shoham

Sounds very mellow with lots of syncopation that works. I do feel that it never really goes anywhere though. Needs to tell a story or build to something IMHO. But still overall cool track.