conflict is primal. what an interesting perspective.
 Mar 09, 2013, 14:37 PST
s.a. zober  Primal yes, inevitable, no...  (Mar 09, 2013, 14:44 PST)
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Pure genius. I love the idea of the footnotes, it's just funny. Really ties the piece together. So true. Artists of the world, unite!® On FeedForward™
 Mar 06, 2013, 05:14 PST
s.a. zober  Thank you. Still a WIP, but I am working on a slideshow, too! Some rhythm issues, IMHO...  (Mar 06, 2013, 05:15 PST)
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s.a. zober gave feedback to Ian MacPhail for “Holiday”:
Very clever story. Quirky characters as always... One thing I would suggest is that while I enjoyed your narrative voice, I feel as if you could give a lot more power to your characters if you would give them some more dialogue.

I feel like they are interesting creatures, from an interesting world and would like to hear their voices a little more clearly in these stories.

Thank you,
-Shoham
 Dec 20, 2012, 08:11 PST
Ian MacPhail  It had to be under 500 words, I barely got away with this because if you count the hypenated words as 1 word, it's 546 which is 500 + ~10% for experimental error.  (Dec 20, 2012, 15:36 PST)
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s.a. zober  Highly scientific! Still, I liked where you were going, and still wouldn't mind learning more about these characters...  (Dec 20, 2012, 17:50 PST)
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JZC gave feedback to Tigran for “My King”:
very interesting perspective. I really like your art work and agree that the events around us can be ridiculous indeed.
 Dec 18, 2012, 13:23 PST
s.a. zober  About this cover: How did you make the faces? Is it a collage, or a pure painting. very impressive. Thank you. -Shoham  (Dec 19, 2012, 05:50 PST)
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JZC gave feedback to 0ctavio G0nzalez for “J-Town”:
so true and so upsetting that a place that represents ultimate holiness has so much suffering
 Dec 05, 2012, 16:56 PST
0ctavio G0nzalez  Muchos gracias. No hablo, Englais...  (Dec 06, 2012, 15:17 PST)
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JZC gave feedback to Dorina for “Premature Arthritis”:
this is sad. so sorry to hear you are on pain. customers need and employers need to be more empathetic.
 Dec 05, 2012, 16:54 PST


WalaWalaWala gave feedback to Dorina for “Premature Arthritis”:
Now I feel really bad that we let you walk all the way down the hill :(

Liked, loved, and bought,
-Shoham

PS: If you want to record this, you can also use our audio recorder/editor: http://www.feed-forward.net/record

Thanks again.
 Dec 03, 2012, 16:05 PST


very nice I really liked ur work
 Nov 22, 2012, 15:34 PST
s.a. zober  Thank you so much, Karen, and yes I'd like to buy "Happiness", how much are you looking for? I'm a student living in The USA. Thank you, -Shoham  (Nov 22, 2012, 19:17 PST)
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Karen Aghamyan  thanks,,, I wrote on my profile ...2000$  (Nov 23, 2012, 08:02 PST)
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s.a. zober  Great piece -- i wish I could afford it!!! So about 813308.93 dram?  (Nov 23, 2012, 08:07 PST)
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Karen Aghamyan  yes  (Nov 23, 2012, 08:28 PST)
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s.a. zober  It's a very fair price, but I don't think I can afford iot yet :( Something for me to set a gola for though! IF you get a chance let m eknow what you think of my new atop-action animation and original song: http://www.feed-forward.net/w.4956_x_the_s Thank you. I'm really enjoying "Selection" as well :)  (Nov 23, 2012, 10:17 PST)
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JZC gave feedback to Barbara for “Time”:
wow! this is great! I agree!
 Nov 14, 2012, 11:53 PST
Barbara  Thank you  (Nov 14, 2012, 15:10 PST)
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WalaWalaWala gave feedback to Barbara for “Time”:
Powerful words of wisdom. "A fickle race we are.", indeed.

-Wala
 Nov 13, 2012, 14:23 PST
Barbara  :)  (Nov 14, 2012, 07:00 PST)
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s.a. zober  "today's the day we step forward"  (Nov 14, 2012, 08:57 PST)
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