This is unbelievably funky! I haven't heard a good disco beat like this for a long time. I am actually quite jealous of your mixing skills (and also your ear for melody). Catchy as all hell. Excellent job. Seriously. Oh, and good use of side-chaining your gates to your kick. It really makes the song jump.

Very cool tune :D Lots of fun stuff to hear in here. A veritable feast for the ears. Lots of well placed moving parts, top notch lyricism. What can I say? iMe gusta! Thank you.
-Shoham

wow! great song and great voice! did you write this?

I like this version too!

What showie said;
More syncopation early on. I disagree with Kelly. I like the pitch bending you do, it's cool.

Very cool piece. I enjoyed listening to it and as Electronic pieces go I didn't like it was too repeditive IMHO. The comment I can say is perhaps that the mastering is a bit flat.

I actually like it! Love the vocals especially, can't remember where it's a sample from, though.

To be fair, this is not my vibe of music. It's not terrible but not great. The vocals are the only thing that lead me to believe that this is anything other than a small- or no-label artist just throwing mass produced samples together in his/her basement. A couple of good transitions (best around 4:05), but altogether, it just sounds too polished...but that is probably a good thing for this genre...?

I like the opening sequence a lot. I would make the suggestion that you maybe want to use a little more syncopation in the beat a little earlier on. The main theme got to be a little bit repetitive after a while. Cool tune. I like where you're going with this. Did you end up checking out any of k78's stuff? You guys have lot in common stylistically, and I think that he could probably give you some more in-depth pointers, too!
Thanks for sharing, keep on making :D
-Shoham

A bit redundant