this is a really beautiful piece. did you write/play/direct?

Airy stuff. I like it, Chris! I feel as if the composition and performance is very solid. I like the direction you took it around 1:45 -- very true to what I think the concept is based on the tags and title. Cool use of the chorus effect on this track. I like the little drum rolls as well. I feel as if you could add a bit more texture starting somewhere around 3:15 or so, keep building it up more until the change at 3:31. I also dig the tension that you build here down the stretch and the finale. I like where this is going, man, keep going! Thank you,
Shoham

... this has the potential as being a rock track, especially around 1:10 ... everyone has their own opinion on what 'Rock' is ... my opinion is that you need real drums, guitar and bass for a rock song ... this is more like distorted techno ... i don't know if the distortion was intentional, but it just sounds like the whole mix is way over peak ...

I like this new sound! The wave form looks cool as ever as well, man :) I am thinking that this is a pretty nifty direction for you, IMHO. It could probably stand to have a bit more bass (?) but I like where this is going all and all! Thank you,
Shoham

Dirty poor. Not the song quality, but the answer to your question... Very chill track, my friend. I wouldn't mind collaborating with on this one, if you are interested. I think I could bake up some .5 way decent lyrics (or better), and a decent vocal track, as well.
I think that we could also do something with a rhythm track, and maybe pick up the tempo somewhere around 2 mins in? Either way, nice one. Thank you!
Shoham

willie, I think that it is good. The mix could be a little bit louder, I think. I am having trouble hearing some of this. I like the ambient feeling. I would maybe say that you have miss tagged this (does it matter that much?) because I don't really think that it is either rap or hip hop, but more ambient... Could be longer too ;) Thank you, I enjoyed it,
Shoham

Those instrumentals are pretty natural sounding mate. Maybe slow the attack on a few of them a bit more so it's not so robotic? I'm loving the vibe through most of it, surely a bit of rhythm percussion couldn't hurt? Very relaxing, good work.

Very chill tune! Great development, thank you! -Shoham

Very chill! Thank you :)

I like it, man! I´m not that familiar with this piece, actually, but its a cool rendition, and makes me want to check out the original rendition. Speaking of rendition, did you ever see A Clockwork Orange™? This piece makes me think of the scene where Alex is listening to a futuristic disco-techno version of Ludwig Van´s nineny ninth and is walking through the mall. Very fun, thanks. How did you make it?
-Shoham