I am ashamed to say that I didn't get this track when I first heard it as well as I feel I understand it now. Very sad tune, and kudos to M.E. for the lyrics. This is going to get my highest praise: belongs in the next [good] Tarantino movie. Thank you,
-Shoham

I really like this one. The poem is really beautiful, and it fits well with your song, kind of unexpectedly. If I were just reading the poem and had to think of what kind of song would fit it, I'd probably go with a dramatic ballad(maybe Canada's own Celine!) since it's uplifting. It's cool that surf music/death poems work well together!

Nice tune, man! I think I know where you got some influence for this one (Pink Floyd). I really like the slide guitar.
The vocal lines at the ends of the last two stanzas, especially, have that moment where they come together with the music really nicely. I hope you understand what I mean, because I don't feel like what I wrote gets the message across.

I like the dreary feeling of this tune. Matches the weather here in Pittsburgh right now :o Very nicely composed, and performed. Still would not mind hearing a little bit more layering with your vocals at the beginning of the tune, but I like it nonetheless! Also enjoyed the occasional harmonies :D Has somewhat of a 1970s' vibe to it :D Good guitar solos! -Shoham