Pretty meh at the beginning. Some of the lyrics could use tweaking by both vocalists (extra syllables, misplaced emphases that sound forced), but the game changes ~1:50 when the female vocals come in. I usually prefer OC over samples, but it doesn't matter here because that shit works. I would have brought it back at ~2:50 where the beat drops as that might make it less choppy.

very cool song. are you planning shuffleboard or minigolf? great voice and the woman's harmonies is great, too. how did you do this?

Excellent keyboard tone. Great collaboration. Great rap. What DAW? -Sho